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Ahri by Overweight-Cat

I am a big fan of Overweight-Cat and any criticism should be taken as wanting to see more awesome work from this artist. 1) smooth out ...

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Ahri by Overweight-Cat
I am a big fan of Overweight-Cat and any criticism should be taken as wanting to see more awesome work from this artist.
1) smooth out the curves and details like the oversized, bumpy palm.
2) The large heart doesn't look too good. lThe tassel contrast and detail is a little basic/cartoony.
3) I personally dislike the eye and nose. facial frame is fine, hair is fine, jawline is fine, mouth is fine. Eyes ought to be sharp and seductive. The current look with the eyelid shape and pupil location makes it look a bit droopy and plain. Nose is slightly too visible on the nostril area, making me think "porcine", which is not good for a sexy char.
4) If the right thigh is over there, where is her left? It's not clear.
5)The right hand is much smaller than the left, but the tails do not reflect the depth. This causes perspective and proportion to be off.

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:iconmoontessa:
Moontessa Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you for the watch :) 
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Mesunari Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2014  Hobbyist
Hi, thank you so much for the watch~! I really appreciate it! :heart:
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Jasmineteax Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2014  Student
just in case you didn't notice, :iconreyard: is an art thief.

reyard.deviantart.com/art/Kata…
this one is actually stolen from the 2nd place of LoL Taiwan region's art contest here
lol.garena.tw/news/news_info.p…

that piece's author is 馬克杯(Magukappu)
home.gamer.com.tw/creationDeta…
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peehs Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013
Thanks for the fav! :ahoy:
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Grishend Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you for :+fav:ing my deviation "Azure Dragon" and adding me to your :+devwatch: list.
I really appreciate it. Have a great day.
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Vyrilien Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Many thanks for the watch! I really appreciate it :heart:
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KnightChan Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you for the watch,I'm glad you like my painting.
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ken1171 Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Just came to say hello and thanks for +devWatching my 3D gallery. Hope you had fun. ^____^
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LaurenConverse Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2011
Thanks for the watch :heart: v :heart:
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ilolamai Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2011
Thanks for the watch :D
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